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I like the composition in this photo; how the three ladies are standing in a row and wearing different coloured costumes. The focus of the shot could be improved because the first lady in the blue costume is slightly out of focus. This photo could definitely be placed in the newspaper because it was taken at a popular event and also shows the faces of the three people very clearly. |
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I chose this photo because it effectively displays one of the many costumes that were worn by the paraders. The subject is well lit and focused. There is a nice contrast between the bystanders in plain clothes and the subject with her colourful and elaborate Stuart era costume. I would send this photo to be published in a newspaper but I don't think it is what they're looking for because it doesn't show many faces and happy people. |
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This man was one of the people involved in the parade. The photo has a nice focus on the man and with the background blurred to draw your eye to the focal point. You can see the subjects face quite well and so this photo could be used in a newspaper. |
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During the parade through the streets, there were many people looking out their windows and also sitting on rooftops. I took a photo of this because it shows people getting together with their friends and family to watch this lively festive event. It also shows an aspect of the Lewes bonfire night that some people don't focus on; the spectators. People gather around and come together to watch this event and it creates nice lively atmosphere and a big sense of togetherness. I sent some of my photos from the Lewes bonfire night to Dave Comeau, the chief reporter at the Crawley news. He gave me some feedback on my photos:
Hi Alex. Thank you for getting in touch. You’ve got some nice pics there. You just need to make a few tweaks for future photos. Comments below…
Photo 4 and 5 are good as you have the people coming towards you so you can see faces and they are good quality pics. Side-on shots are not so good because you can’t see their faces properly and faces are what sell papers and what people looking at online galleries want to see.
Also, think about how the photo is framed. In photo 2, your subject in the middle is nicely shot, but at the edges you have people chopped in half.
Photo 3 would be a really nice shot, of the people sat in a row, if you got up close. Don’t be afraid to talk to people. Almost everybody you will meet at events like this will be more than happy to be photographed. Just wander over and let them know who you are and what you’re doing. You’ll get much better pics as a result.
From this feedback I have learned to cropped images if there are people chopped in half, to take photos where the subject's face are in full view and to get closer and interact with people more. This is the result of my Lewes photo shoot.
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